abandonator's showcase

[Abandonator]

well, i do not say i'm good, but i just want to show what i make and let you guys see the progress and experience i gain

[Abandonator]

[Abandonator]

there were several versions of that one

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[Abandonator]

this is version 3.0 , on another pc i have an improved version, i'll upload it later

[Benzin]

like quadruple post or what?

[Abandonator]

well, ooh sh** i'm so sorry i didn't get them properly in one post!! omg i will now burn in hell!!

please man, stop to dick on my back for 5 mins ok?
thx

[Benzin]

Jesus christ man chill out. I only said you quadruple posted. Is this cause I gave you a 1/10 for your sig cause you seem to be being cold to me since then.

Now to your work:
Try to blend in your renders instead of just leaving them there cause it makes it look really unappealing.
Also try to make things have a focal point, some sigs you've done this well but others not so much. You need to choose the most important part of the image and make it attract peoples attention, like make it brighter than the rest, use flow to lead the eye to it or make it sharper than the rest.


My main suggestion would be to go to deviant art and look for tutorials.

P.S are you using Gimp or PS?

[Abandonator]

can't view my cyborg 3.0 yet, it's on my pc wich is down




to the ps: i use PS CS3

[Junk angel]

Agreed on taking Devart tuts. There are plenty there which will definitely help you.

Also I recommend you start using the path tool for renders or get them from planetrenders.net, since yours tend to be very choppy on the sides.

One more thing.
I'd start with working with very small sigs to be honest. It will give you a better feel for composition and you will learn to make stuff not empty.

And as I've said somewhere else before TEXT needs a lot of work.

Nice work on the cyborg though.