abandonator's showcase

[Zapex]

I Like Copain, I May Us That In A Sig If You Don't Mind.

[Marden]

I made that render, but you can use it however you want.

[Zapex]

alright thanks Marden

[Abandonator]

well I just stated it in you showcase,

thanks man, I appreciate it

[Abandonator]

fast walpaper I made

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[Legolas*]

Originally Posted by abandonator

fast walpaper I made

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interesting.

[Jetfreak]

Congrats on the SOTW award, cool

The WallP's not too shabby too, what software did you use?

[Abandonator]

Originally Posted by Jetfreak

Congrats on the SOTW award, cool

The WallP's not too shabby too, what software did you use?

yeah I'm very happy, it was the first time I joined the contest


I use CS3, but I did not make the c4d myself, I just edited the c4d

[Junk angel]

Overall I like it
Nice improvement ,and you've probably got more practice than me by now. Been neglecting PS and GFX laltely.

Still I can see a lot of space for some improvements.
THe first and most evident. The lack of any kind of border. It could benefit from one to sort of encapsule it, tie it together.

The second most evident. The text. It's nice you tried to put it into the flow, but it still looks like a fist to the eye slightly to be honest. The lines don't align as they should, and the color of it i sso different that's it's the second if not the first element anyone and everyone sees.
Which is a shame really.

Now subtleties

I;d like to see the man to be blended in a bit better to be honest. Maybe on the top of his head somewhere. Mot sure.
And lastly, a slight second focal and depth issue.
Have you tried sort of blurring the abstract design as you go deeper? Being the most blurry among the black central elements. It would add more depth and defocalise the part a bit while still keeping it in the flow.

[Abandonator]

thanks for the comment, now I now what to work at,
I'm glad people tell me I made a lot of improvement, but I always can get better, so that's why I like your advices,

I'll work with borders, try to blend his head better ( it is a bit odd now you say it.

it was my first c4 picture so still alot to learn about that, but I'll try your advices

thanks and cheers