This is just some feedback to the unfinished map by Eric Potter
http://jointoperations.filefront.com...of_Death;60450
About the layout, it is very well placed everything which makes it a nice map, I especially like the big ramps. The only 3 things i have noticed are:
1: The bridges, you crash very easy on em
2: Alot of the vehicles aren't standing right
3: The ammount of concrete slabs makes a very bad fps, better placing em and use less of em will improve the fps alot.
Also they cross each other which makes the ceiling dont look good
But, all with all, the map is

especially the civilians at the end of the track.
Oh, 1 more point you could try to place tiles under the concrete slabs on the ground cuz the grass comes trough whch is pretty disturbing.
I attached some images of some of the probs: