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Poetry Howdy there. Well, there aint much to say, and I dont know if this is the right forum, but I didnt find anywhere else where I could post something like this. All right, the thing is, that I've been writing things for a long while and I guess everyone has felt that strange thing that makes you wanna be heard. I mainly write in spanish, Don't know why, but I guess it's my native language, but I've written a few things in english, even if I dont speak it very well, whatever... Well, this is called "free Poetry", as it doesn't follow rules of classic poetry (Rhymes, specific number of words, etc.). Where can I go? I just love you You know it is true So, where can I go? Nowhere Just leave me here I am the one who’s gone I am the on who loves you Just don’t le it be a broken hearth Tell me, who’s gone? Yeah, I know it’s me Nevertheless, it could be you For without you, I don’t exist And without myself, I‘m me gone However, without me, you aren’t anymore For I can’t think on you You are me and I am you We need each other Like the river needs its water Like the bird needs the sky Like eagle needs its eyes You are mine I am yours Like the tree needs someone’s view For the trees sing when you walk And they sing for you For your happiness For you are a virgin For me, my princess The time in my space The eyes of my soul The light in my wine Fire Everything ---------- This is closer to what Classical poetry is There is no way out There is no one around You love is biting me right now There is no one around I am on my own I need your love Girl, tell me now I'm gone I am gone forever Gone For nighttime while Have fun for my time Going to come back? Never I have the will However, you get me twice Girl, I love you I got the will I am all yours Just to tell me I will get through Just tell me ‘Cause I need you Love me Listen to me Love me Just gone with the wind And the sea sparkling’ your name The rain tasting your lips Feeling your hips Smile this day, because I am gone Away, away, away I am taking my way If you follow me, I turn alone I get back to your hearth And on to my dreams You are my rose I am your thorn You are part of me And I am part of you ‘Cause I love you ‘Cause you’ll love me Don’t bring me down Don’t take me out Sweet girl, your mine Let me get down your line -------------- And this is actually a song I wrote. Look, around yourself, don’t you feel alone? Well, I do, but I am on my own And I don’t know how I make it through All the day long with my blues True love will never die That’s why I can’t forget you, even if I try For you are my only love Don’t leave me wounded, all alone ‘Cause even if the morning was cold Or I was running through the storm I would always see you again I never had to wait But now, you’re farther away from me Even though its just a few blocks away Who’s smile am I going to see? Every morning, day after day Yeah, it seems so easy for everyone Having what they want and need all the time But I have to stay alone in the tide And I guess I wont fall in love anymore Getting your love seems so hard But Jesus walked on the water one day Sometimes I think my hearth will tear apart And that my soul is going to wither away Well, hope ya liked it. Later. |
Re: Poetry From one writer to another, I thought it was good. :bows: I know what you mean all the stanzas, the message is clear. |
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