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[Acualy Is Confusingkid]

So this is my first Web Layout, and I would like to know what you all think!

It took about 3-4 hours, and would probably take another hour to slice+code if I knew how...

Anyways, here it is. (Ignore the lame filler stock images)
Programs Used:
Adobe Photoshop CS3
Adobe Illustrator CS3

Spoiler:

[Junk angel]

Just commenting from a first glance
Overall - like it
Problem - the thing rounded edges on the outermost elements - they're pixelated - quite noticably

[Acualy Is Confusingkid]

Originally Posted by wraithcat

Just commenting from a first glance
Overall - like it
Problem - the thing rounded edges on the outermost elements - they're pixelated - quite noticably

Yeah, i noticed that as well. i don't know why or how that happened. i used the polygonal lasso to draw the shape, and i used the "snap" feature so it would be smooth, but for some reason, its not as smooth as it should be..

Thanks for your feedback though!

[Abandonator]

I'll ask my sister to have a look on it, I like it, besides some details wich have already mentioned.

she studies graphics so

EDIT: the P or the word "project" runs throught the word under it, small thing but thouhgt I better tell

[Acualy Is Confusingkid]

Originally Posted by abandonator

I'll ask my sister to have a look on it, I like it, besides some details wich have already mentioned.

she studies graphics so

EDIT: the P or the word "project" runs throught the word under it, small thing but thouhgt I better tell

Yes, I know about the "P" thing. I debated whether or not to do anything about it, and you can see what my choice was..

[Acualy Is Confusingkid]

Update: My newest design. Nice and simple.

Spoiler:

Please CnC.

EDIT: I also realized why the first design had pixelated curves. When i changed the values, I didnt do it smoothly... It's actually a long story explaining why. but I fixed it in V2.

[Phoenix_22]

The first one is all a bit too glowy, if you know what I mean. A slight but strong outer glow will work, but at the moment it is a little too bright.

Second one looks better, but I think a black background with white text will fit the site design you did earlier, if this is supposed to be a sub-page.

[Acualy Is Confusingkid]

Originally Posted by Phoenix_22

The first one is all a bit too glowy, if you know what I mean. A slight but strong outer glow will work, but at the moment it is a little too bright.

Second one looks better, but I think a black background with white text will fit the site design you did earlier, if this is supposed to be a sub-page.

Yeah, i know what you mean about the glows.. I kinda went overboard with them..

But no, this newest design is an entirely new design in itself. It only references the last design as a "previous work" if that makes sense.

I'm actually starting on yet ANOTHER design right after I make this post.

Thanks for the feedback! It is very appreciated.