Myth, try to suggest ways of making it better not whats just wrong with them. Sure you said can help make the text better but that's the first time. I utterly hate critics who don't help you improve and don't show their work either :P
Well, try anyway. One thing I can see is that you like that style a little too much. Practice making borders and make doodles to use as backgrounds.
This is how you make doodles:
Make a pattern or texture (difference clouds, multiple gradients in difference mode, waves, take a picture and apply polar coordinates, etc), then apply one or 2 filters to it and finally colorize it. Explore Photoshop just to see what you can do with it. The worst thing that can happen is that you'll have a folder full of stuff.
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